Advise from section Writing 1A

In Writing Ⅲ and Writing Ⅳ, there are many homework, for example, blogging, book review, typing speed homework, essays, and so on. I think you should write a blog early as soon as possible. Otherwise, you may suffer from a lot of homework. You can write articles from spring vacation, so you should write articles steadily. In 1st semester, you have to write 10,000 words. In 2nd semester, you have to write 15,000 words. You may suffer from blogging in 2nd semester more than 1st semester. I recommend finishing a lot of homework early. If you can finish them early, you don’t rack your brains! I think you can have any time to spare. If you are repeater, I think you realize what should you do.

The most important thing is cut a class and loaf on the homework. If you absent this class, you can’t understand what should you do. Teacher explains to student about homework in details, so you may be able to understand how to do homework. It is very terrible thing. Please throw time away! If you fail your credit of this class, you have to do all homework again! It is really terrible! You have to write 10,000 or 15,000 or 25,000 words again!

If you have any question, you can ask for assistant in this class. So don’t worry about anything. The assistant is very kind to us. They teach us kindly. Teaches also kind to us. We ask for teachers “I don’t know this.”, and then teacher give advises. You can do it! Stick with it!

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Reflections on Writing Ⅳ

I'm going to write about writing Ⅳ class this article. Blogging homework started on August. I started blogging homework from August. I wrote 1402 words on August. I decided to finish all homework until end of the year because I want to concentrate on exam study on January. I had to write blog 15000 words, eighteen of book review, twenty typing speed homework, essays, and so on. I held out all homework. I especially held on blogging on November. I wrote 6030 words. This semester, I wrote three essays. It was about how I have improved languages, my favorite place, and joint movie review. I wrote movie review with peer. We wrote about Johnny Depp in this essay. I really like him, so I enjoyed writhing this essay. I could finish all homework until end of the year, so I'm happy!

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Reflections on Writing Ⅲ

Good morning everyone. I'm going to write about my writing Ⅲ class this time. To tell the truth, I'm not remember about the class in 1st semester. At first, I was surprised at amount of writing homework. We had to some homework, for example, blogging about 10000 words, fifteen of book review, essays, and typing speed homework. I thought I couldn't finish all homework until summer vacation. However I could finish all homework during June. And after all, I did 20 book review. When I was in the 2nd grade on April, I didn't think that I suffered from a lot of homework. I dislike and am not good at writing a English sentences. So I felt pain. The most dislike homework was essay. I did five essays in 1st semester. I wrote about letter to host family, university life, and language learning history. I had to write 300 words all essays. I really dislike this homework. But my classmates are very interesting and kind to me. I dislike a lot of homework, but I love classmates.

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January 9th

HAPPY NEW YEAR! EVERYONE! How was your winter vacation? I spent fun time during winter vacation. On December 29th, high school's alumni was held. I could many friends of high school. It was really fun time with them. And then I went to bar with Ayumi, Rika, Chisato, Mariko and Misato. I'm going to meet them this weekend. I'm looking forward to it. Next, my friend, Chihiro came back to Komamoto from Canada on December 27th. So I went to MK dinning with Chihiro, Kurumi and Ayaka on December 30th. I really like MK dinning. I really happy to meet Chihiro for a long time. And I went to my grandfather's house the first day of the year. I could meet my grandfather for a long time, so I talked with him a lot of. On January 5th, I opened time capsule with peers in elementary school. I entered letter, pictures and score. And then we went to izakaya. My friend, Saho works at there. We were very enjoy. Last day in winter vacation, I stayed home all the day. I could spent calm time in my home.

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Happy Birthday Chihiroヽ(^o^)丿

Today is Chihiro's birthday! She became 20 years old today. She goes to Canada, Victoria as go abroad now. But she will come back to Kumamoto soon ! I want to meet her as soon as possible! I really like her! HAPPY BIRTHDAY☆Chi-chan♡

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BR 2-20: Twelve Things to Do at Age 12

I have check next to everything on my list of Twelve Things to Do at Age 12- and I have two new friends. (p. 22)

When I was a twelve years old, I didn’t have things which I should to do. I didn’t make a list which I should do at age twelve like a boy in this book. But I have things to do during I go to this university now. At first, I want to take good score at TOEIC. I took a TOEIC examination last year, but I couldn’t take good score. I took about 500 score. At the time, I deeply regret. And so I decided to take more 700 score during university student. I have some homework to do now, so I haven’t enough time to study TOEIC. So I want to hang on study English from next year.

I have other things to do during university student. I want to go abroad. I want to go to Europe or America or Canada. Now my friend, Chihiro goes to Canada, Victoria. I really envy her. It is my dream to go abroad. She will back to Kumamoto soon. I want to meet her, and I want to hear about life in Canada. I think that it is good to make a list which should do. 

Wuest, Marcia. (2009). Twelve Things to Do at Age 12. Cambridge, England: Cambridge University Press.

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December 19th

Good morning everyone. Today is very cold. The other day, I went to yakiniku with Haruka and Takamitsu. It was gutan dayヽ(^o^)丿！ I really looked forward to this day. We planned this about two months ago. We were very busy because of part-time job, much homework and so on. Takamitsu traveled around Kyusyu by bicycle. I really respect him. I and Haruka said to him, "Okaeri !" This time, we went to kurobouzu. It is yakiniku restaurant. I went to the restaurant for the first time. I was excited very much. Food was very delicious and shop assistants are very kind to us. I spent good time with them. After we ate yakiniku, we went to Saintmarc cafe. I drank ice cocoa. I really like it. Haruka and Takamitsu ate chococro. It is delicious bread. I really like it, too. We talked about various thing. We promised next gutan. We are going to go to Tosu outlet. I want to buy some clothes and shoes!

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BR 2-19: After School

After school I play with my dog. (p. 2)

When I haven't part-time job, I often spend a time like a boy of this book. Now I work about forth a week. I have some homework to do, so I usually do some homework after school. I will finish blogging homework by end of this month. I have to write about 500 words at least. I want to finish the homework during this month. I do not only homework, but also watch TV, play with my cats, and play a game. I recently done one game. It's a LINE POP. It's a very simple and interesting game. If you have a smartphone or iPhone, you can play it.

I often went to one park in my hometown after school when I was an elementary school student. The park is Ikenoue Central Park. It was complete about ten years ago. I really like this park because I could make many good memories at there. It is my favorite place. I seldom go to the park now. I want to spend a time like when I was an elementary school student after school.

Winesap, Cory. (2004). After School. South Yarra, Australia: Macmillan Education Australia.

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December 12th

It is very cold today! I can't wake up because of cold. I hate winter, but I hate summer more than winter.

Last month, November 20th, I went to MK for the first time with Kasumi, Ayaka, Tama-san and Kenshi-san. Kasumi and Ayaka is my friends of same department in KGU. Tama-san and Kenshi-san is our senior in same circle. They are very interesting and kind to us. MK dinning is a one-pot dish made at the table by cooking vegetables and slices of meat in boiling broth and eaten with a soy-based sauce restaurant. It is said "syabu-syabu" in Japanese. I like it very much. In winter, I surely eat it. This time, I really could enjoy thanks to them! I really looking forward to this time. I became like MK dinning. The food are very delicious! I ate many pork and vegetables and noodles. There are not only pork, vegetables and noodles, but also Chinese snacks. It is very delicious, too. Kasumi works at MK dinning, so she taught us about various things, for example, how to eat more delicious, recommendation food, and recommendation sause. I could eat it deliciously thanks to her. Kasumi had discount thicket, so we could eat it at a 30 percent discount.

After that, we went to Hikari-no-Mori. There are supermarket, cloths shops, and so on. I often go to there with my friends or my family. But it is a little far from my house. We took a purikura at there . We chose one purikura which we can on slim. It was really fun time. Tama-san and Kenshi-san drive me home. I want to go to there with them!

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Essay 2-03b: Joint Movie Reviews

We will write about Johnny Depp. This essay is combination essay. Our group member is Jumpei and Megumi. We choose that appear on Johnny Depp movies. He is the best actor in the world. He gets a lot of prize all over the world. For example, best actor, the sexiest man all over the world a villain's role and so on. And he has much money. Wikipedia said, he get money about 4 billion dollars last year. He is so rich actor. We choose 2 movies. First movie is Pirates of the Caribbean ~The Curse of the Black Pearl~. Another movie is Alice in Wonderland. 

First movie is Pirates of the Caribbean ~The Curse of the Black Pearl~. This movie watched about Jumpei. This movie is so awesome and cool movie. This movie showed in 2003. This movie main actor is Johnny Depp. The scene left an impression in the first, Jack Sparrow and Will go toward Barbosa. Jack Sparrow purpose is revenge. He has pitiful history. Barbosa was Jack’s servant. But he was robbing Jack’s pirate ship. So Jack wants to kill to Barbosa. Will’s purpose is rescuing his girlfriend life. Their purpose is not match. During go toward Barbosa, This movie was so exciting and also that his scene is that Pirate ship is so real. And some scene have action scene. And their conversation is very interesting. Their purpose is difference. But theircommunicate with them heart. It was so funny.

And also last fight scene is also excited. This is the most exciting scene in this movie. A lot of actor and supernumerary were fierce fight. It was so real fight scene. This  scene so excited and  impressed. We have never been to seen that battle scene like that in a movie. Everything scale is differences other movies. This scene location is sea. This movie has a lot of battle scene. But last scene is so cool. If you never been to seen this movie, you have to watch one time!! You are able to get good inspiration.   Pirates of the Caribbean ~The Curse of the Black Pearl~  was good movie in the world.  So next Alice in Wonderland . Next paragraph talk about Alice in Wonderland.

Next movie is Alice in Wonderland. This movie watched about Megumi. This movie was shown in 2008. The original of this movie is “Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland” and “Through the Looking-Glass, and What Alice Found There”. Johnny Depp played the part of Mad Hatter in this movie. The word “Mad Hatter” have a meaning that mad as a hatter. As the word means, his head and leg are turned. The story of each movie and role are different,  Jack Sparrow and Mad Hatter are alike. In each movie, Johnny Depp wears a hat. And  his behavior is alike.

There are also found similar scene each movie. It is that there is fight scene using sword. Only a few has a scene fight using sword in this movie. Maybe almost all people know that there is fight scene in Pirates of the Caribbean. In the last of this movie, Mad Hatter uses sword to defeat red queen. If you watched this scene, you felt Jack Sparrow’s face occurred. His expression and acting makes us exciting. Some technique, for example, computer graphics and special makeup, are used. These techniques are very excellent, but Johnny Depp’s acting is very excellent, too. 

We could found various things through two movies, Pirates of the Caribbean and Alice in Wonderland. There are difference and the points of comparison. But we think that both movies are unique. Both movies are great. We could find not only story of these movies, but also Johnny Depp’s effort and excellent as actor. We watched bonus contents. The co-star says, “He can enter into a role, shortly after a hair makeup finishes. It is amazing.” He always does the best. He is really great. He has a bad past, but we don’t care about such a thing because pleasant he is great. He will continue performance wonderful from now on, and will impress people. 

Bruckheimer, Jerry, (Producer)& Verbinski, Gore, (Director). (2003). Pirates of the Caribbean ~The Curse of the Black Pearl~. United States: Walt Disney Studios Distribution.

Zanuck, Richard D., Roth, Joe, Todd, Suzanne, & Todd, Jennifer (Producers), & Burton, Tim, (Director). (2008). Alice in Wonderland. United States: Walt Disney Pictures.

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Essay 2-03a: Joint Movie Reviews

We will write about Johnny Depp. This essay is combination essay. Our group member is Jumpei and Megumi. We choose that appear on Johnny Depp movies. He is the best actor in the world. He gets a lot of prize all over the world. For example, best actor, the sexiest man all over the world a villain's role and so on. And he has much money. Wikipedia said, he get money about 4 billion dollars last year. He is so rich actor. We choose 2 movies. First movie is Pirates of the Caribbean ~The Curse of the Black Pearl~. Another movie is Alice in Wonderland.

First movie is Pirates of the Caribbean ~The Curse of the Black Pearl~. This movie watched about Jumpei. This movie is so awesome and cool movie. This movie showed in 2003. This movie main actor is Johnny Depp. The scene left an impression in the first, Jack Sparrow and Will go toward Barbosa. Jack Sparrow purpose is revenge. He has pitiful history. Barbosa was Jack’s servant. But he was robbing Jack’s pirate ship. So Jack wants to kill to Barbosa. Will’s purpose is rescuing his girlfriend life. Their purpose is not match. During go toward Barbosa, We were so exciting. We think this scene is Pirate ship is so real. And some scene have action scene. And their conversation is very interesting. Their purpose is difference. But their communicate with them heart. It was so funny.

And also last fight scene is also excited. We think this is the most exciting scene in this movie. A lot of actor and supernumerary were fierce fight. It was so real fight scene. We were so excited and we were impressed. We have never been to seen that battle scene like that in a movie. Everything scale is differences other movies. This scene location is sea. This movie has a lot of battle scene. But last scene is so cool. If you never been to seen this movie, you have to watch one time!! You are able to get good inspiration. We are recommending this movie and Alice in Wonderland. Next paragraph talk about Alice in Wonderland.

Next movie is Alice in Wonderland. This movie watched about Megumi. This movie is was shown in 2008. The original of this movie is “Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland” and “Through the Looking-Glass, and What Alice Found There”. Johnny Depp played the part of Mad Hatter in this movie. The word “Mad Hatter” have a meaning that mad as a hatter. As the word means, his head and leg are turned. The story of each movie and role are different, we felt that Jack Sparrow and Mad Hatter are alike. In each movie, Johnny Depp wears a hat. And we think that his behavior is alike. So we might be felt that.

We also found similar scene each movie. It is that there is fight scene using sword. Only a few has a scene fight using sword in this movie. Maybe almost all people know that there is fight scene in Pirates of the Caribbean. In the last of this movie, Mad Hatter uses sword to defeat red queen. When we watched this scene, Jack Sparrow’s face occurred. His expression and acting makes us exciting. Some technique, for example, computer graphics and special makeup, are used. These techniques are very excellent, but Johnny Depp’s acting is very excellent, too.

We could found various things through two movies, Pirates of the Caribbean and Alice in Wonderland. There are difference and the points of comparison. But we think that both movies are unique. Both movies are great. We could find not only story of these movies, but also Johnny Depp’s effort and excellent as actor. We watched bonus contents. The co-star says, “He can enter into a role, shortly after a hair makeup finishes. It is amazing.” He always does the best. He is really great. He has a bad past, but we don’t care about such a thing because pleasant he is great. He will continue performance wonderful from now on, and will impress people. 

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Essay mind-map

Johnny Depp

• appear on movies
• Pirates of Caribbean
• The Curse Of The Black Pearl
• Dead Man's Chest
• At World's End
• On Stranger Tides
• Alice in Wonder land
• Sleepy Hollow
• Finding neverland
• Charlie and the Chocolate Factory
• The Tourist
• Dark Shadow
• prize
• Best acter
• The most sexy man all over the world
• a villain's role
• appear on TV
• SpongeBod SquarePants
• history
• he was born in Owensboro, Kentucky
• When he was 14 years, inject a narcotic
• When he was 16, quit high school and start career as musician
• 20, he married with Lori Anne Allison
• 20, change he's position about actor
• 1990, He appeared on Cry Baby for the first time
• 2003, He appear on Pirates Of Caribbean
• nominate Academy Award about main actor

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December 5th

Good morning, everyone. My partner is Junpei. We will write about Johnny Depp. He appears on a lot of movies. Almost all movies which he appears became famous. He won many prize. We are going to watch his two movies. Junpei writes about Pirates of the Caribian. I write about Alice in Wonderland. To tell the truth, I have never seen this movie, so I borrowed this movie at TSUTAYA. I'm going this movie today.

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Essay Prep.

Hello everyone. I will write about movie review next essay. I'm going to write it with Junpei. Our remarkable actor is Johnny Depp. He appears a lot of movies. We are going to write about difference between Pirates of the Caribian and Alice in Wonderland. I wish we could write good essay.

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[TH 15] My favorite high school memory

My favorite high school memory is attended wedding ceremony of my class teacher. After I graduated from my high school, my class teacher got married. The day was very wonderful. I arranged to meet my classmates in front of PARCO in the day. We wore school uniform even though we graduated from high school. I didn’t think that I could wear school uniform after graduated, so I was very excited. We went to lunch with my classmates. We went to restaurant, “R・K・T’s”. The dishes of the restaurant were very delicious. I often go to the restaurant. Then we went to KKR hotel. The wedding ceremony held in the hotel. We sang a song “samba of ladybug.” This song is famous as wedding sing. I like this song. My class teacher was very beautiful. I was moved very much. I attend wedding ceremony for the first time

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[TH 14] My favorite junior high memory

The best memory in junior high school is gone to Okinawa as school trip. I went to Okinawa for the first time, so I was very excited. I went to there when I was second grader in junior high school. I was acting as an executive committee of the school trip. I went to there in three nights and four days. The school trip was wonderful trip. I could go to various places in Okinawa. I and my friends went to Churaumi aquarium. It was very large aquarium. I was impressed. I watch many fishes. I could watch a dolphin show for the first time. I think that dolphin is intelligent. I ate Soki soba. It is the Okinawa noted product. It is delicious. The sea of Okinawa is very beautiful! I wanted to swim in the sea, but I couldn’t because I went to Okinawa in winter. Second day, I went to Okinawa International Street. There are various shops. 

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[TH 13] My favorite class

My favorite class is Honors English Seminar. Teachers are Ms. Mukai and Mr. Judy. I have this class in the third period on every Friday. I take this class with Hiromi, Kimino and Misaki. There are students who is third grader and forth grader, too. I can learn many things in this class. In the spring term in this year, I discussed about “School uniform is good for us?” and “Vegetarian is good?” I’m not good at discuss, so it was difficult for me to discuss with other people. But other people were very kind to me. When I couldn’t understand what partner said, the partner taught me to it. I was happy. In fall term, I translate put English into Japanese or put Japanese into English. It is more difficult than discuss. But I’m interested in translate job, so I want to hang on it with my class mates.

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[TH 12] My favorite place

My favorite place is my hometown. I like the place very much. I can relax when I was in hometown. There are many favorite places. I live in Karyo, kite wars in Kumamoto city. First, my favorite place in my hometown is Ikenoue Center Park. It is very large park. When I was an elementary school and junior high school student, I always go to there with my friends after school. We always play tag, soccer, baseball, and so on. I seldom go to there with them now. I want to go to there with them, and then I want to play. Second is ROUND 1. I often go to there. I have worked at there as part-time job before three months ago. There are karaoke, bowling and spocha. It is very interesting institution. When I worked at there, many my friends in my hometown visited at there. I could meet their at ROUND 1.

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[TH 11] My favorite animation

I watch some animations. I especially like “Detective Conan.” This animation is mystery story. This animation is broadcasted from 6 p.m. on every Saturday. I really like this animation. The hero in this animation is Edogawa Conan. But this name isn’t real. His real name is Kudou Shinichi. He is seventeen years old and high school student. He was taken a poison by black organization, and then his body became small. He had become an elementary school student. It looks is child, but his blain is adult. I like him, but I like Kid the phantom thief, too. He is very cool and is good at magic. He often steals some jewels to reveal the truth that his father died. A movie of this animation is broadcasted every year. I especially like the 14^th movie. The title is “The Lost Ship in The Sky.” I went to watch this movie two years ago. It was very good story.

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BR 2-18: Henry and Mudge and the Long Weekend

Henry and Henry's big dog Mudge work up one Saturday in February and looked outside. (p.5)
I think that Henry's family is very good after I finished read this book. Henry and henry's big dog Mudge spend boring Saturday. His father spend boring Saturday, too. Therefore their mother proposes something to fun. They decided to make a castle. I haven't ever made something with my family, so I envy this family. One day, Henry and his father plan to surprise their mother. I thought this family is ideal family.

If I had boring weekend, I would like to go to zoo. I don't go to zoo since I was an elementary school student. I want to see many animals. I like penguins very much. They are very cute. I don't like lions. They are little scare. I want go to plants and animals in Kengun.

Rylant, Cynthia. (1996). Henry and Mudge and the Long Weekend. New York, NY: Aladdin Paperbacks.

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